Friday, September 26, 2008

[snow angels]

snow angels in the grass
slender blades tickle arms and legs,
lightly slicing into you

doesn’t matter what you do, where you’re going to.
have you ever made
snow angels in the grass?

do you want to talk about it?
Dear, are these words
lightly slicing into you?

hot summer days leave girls
lying down, laughing
snow angels in the grass

these new sensations,
they cut me through. are they
lightly slicing into you too?

tiny specks they hit the sun
and they blind me, those
snow angels in the grass
lightly slicing into you

Yes...so this was basically the best poem I wrote at CTY Carlisle 2008...Although I adore "Pink", I think this one's more polished. <3

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